Posted by: nancyisanders | March 30, 2015

Book Review: Only God Can Make a Kitten

Only God Can Make a Kitten
By Rhonda Gowler Greene
Illustrated by Laura J. Bryant

What an adorable book! This 32-page picture book begs to be read to a little one while snuggling on your lap. With sweet rhyming text, the soft and tender illustrations are the perfect compliment! A mother and her two children romp and explore the outdoors. Climbing on rocks, swimming in the sea, and discovering a newly sprouted seed, every step of they way they conclude that only God can make each one. (After reading this, I’m itching to go outside and play with children and worship God in the beauty of his creation.)

What I Like
I like the affirmation of truth this teaches little ones that God is the great designer and creator. I especially like the fun word-play and sense of wonder the text brings. For example: “Mama, look! A tiny sprout! Who made this sprig of spring pop out? He who knows our every need. Only God can make a seed.” A great read-aloud. But even more than this, the beautiful and soft illustrations are filled with joy and discovery. And of course, it includes the fact all cat-lovers will adore…“Mama, look! A little cat! Who makes it purr and curl like that? He loves animals, it is written. Only God can make a kitten.” A treasure I highly recommend for many times of reading together and sharing the truth about Creator God.

-Thanks, BookLook Bloggers for another wonderful free book in exchange for my honest review!

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Posted by: nancyisanders | March 30, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in One Month

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The end of the month is in sight! How did you do with CHABOOCHA, the Chapter Book Challenge to write a chapter book in just one month? I want to give a big thank you to Becky Fyfe, our fearless leader and coordinator of this yearly event.

If you’re not yet done or even close to finishing, don’t despair. Just pick up where you left off and go for the finish line!

And if you’ve been following along here on my blog and have been using THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER as your mentor text, it’s time to finish up your manuscript and submit it.

For starters, let’s talk about editing your manuscript. CLICK HERE to read an awesome (and fun) checklist by Lee Wardlaw for editing and revising.

Let’s also talk about finalizing your manuscript. It needs a chapter title for each chapter and also Table of Contents at the front of your book. Don’t worry about page numbers for your table of contents. You won’t know that until the book is typeset and illustrations are added in.

Go over the submission checklist from the last time we submitted a nonfiction early reader to Kaeden Books to make sure you have all your ducks in a row.

Go ahead and type up your cover letter. (Especially remember to include your SASE and the extra fun, super-duper strategy I recommend in the cover letter.)

And then pop it in an envelope and submit it in the mail.

Then dance a happy dance. Pick up your favorite feline writing buddy, kiss him on his furry little head and say, “We did it!” (Well, actually, you did it. He just shed furry hairs all over it and took a nap on the envelope after you addressed it and put it on the counter to be there when you’re ready to go to the post office.)

And then get ready!!!!! Our next writing adventure here on my blog will be to write an early chapter book and submit it to a publisher who offers royalty contracts to their authors. (Think 10,000 words or less. You can do this!)

We’re going to take our time. No rushing for this next adventure. We’ll just complete one task at a time.

We’re going to go step by step along the journey. No questions left unanswered…All you gotta do is ask them!

I’ve had a number of chapter books published with publishers big and small–both nonfiction and fiction! I’ve been flown to a publishing house to meet with their editor and marketing and series creator to brainstorm outlines for 3 chapter books so I’ll be sharing firsthand and insider experiences and more on how to create and write a chapter book from beginning to successful end.

So if you didn’t have the chance to write a chapter book this month because of your crazy schedule or you just weren’t sure where to start, plan to join in on the upcoming fun!!!!!
(I hope you’ll join in. You’ll be happy you did. And we’ll be happy you did too!)

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 27, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in One Month

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As we’re finishing up our back matter for our early chapter book, here are some tips to make it easier.

Creating the Abbreviated Word List
To make a list of 48 of the more challenging vocabulary words in my story, I opened up my story in a document and moved that open document to the left side of my screen. I changed the text to be 150% and made the document as small as possible to fit on my screen.

Then I opened up a new document and put it on the right side of my screen. I sized this document as small as possible so that both documents were now side by side.

Starting with Chapter 1 on the left document, I read through it and added long or difficult vocabulary words to the blank document on the right. I also numbered these with the automatic number system. I spread out to find words in every chapter until I had 48 words listed. Then I deleted the numbers and copied these words and pasted them at the end of my story in the document on the left.

Writing Discussion Questions
For the Discussion Questions in the back matter, I actually copied some of the questions in our mentor text, THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER, and used words from other questions. I know enough about Common Core State Standards to recognize the wording they like in this section supports the second grade English language arts standards for reading literature.

My story is about a little boy who finds an abandoned baby raccoon in the woods. Here is a sample of some of the questions I wrote for my back matter:

Before Reading:
* What do you think happens to wild animals that need help?

During Reading:
* How do you think Landon felt when he found the baby raccoon in the hollow oak tree? Use examples from the story to explain your answer.

After Reading
* Have you ever wanted to help an animal? Describe your experience.

Once you write the back matter to include with your manuscript, you’re on the home stretch! Time to finish this baby up and put it in the mail. I’ll post more on that in upcoming posts, so stay tuned!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 24, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in One Month

This week as we’re wrapping up our early chapter book to submit to Kaeden Books, it’s time to write the Back Matter.

In our mentor text, THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER, there is one last page of text that is printed on the inside of the back cover. It has an Abbreviated Word List. It lists the Word Count. It also has three sets of discussion questions for a parent or educator to use. All of this is called Back Matter.

Does your mentor text have Back Matter? If so, this is the time to work on it.

If you are using the same book as I am and following along here on my blog, here is what you’ll need in the Back Matter you include with your manuscript:

1. Abbreviated Word List of 24 words in alphabetical order. If you know how to format columns within your document, you can put this in 6 columns. (If not, a single column is fine.)

2. Word Count: THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER has 2600 words so you want to make yours as close to that as possible.

3. Discussion questions:
Before Reading: 2-3 questions
During Reading: 3 questions
After Reading: 3 questions

Let me know if you have any questions about this!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 23, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in One Month

CHABOOCHA calendar 2015

If you’ve been following along with my calendar here on my blog to write an 8-chapter early chapter book using THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER as our mentor text, we’re flying into the home stretch now!

If you’ve fallen behind as I have, you can do this! Just start where you dropped off and schedule time to write on your calendar this week.

Also, this week is the time to edit your book and make it shine. If you belong to a critique group, take it and ask for feedback. If not, ask a young child to read it and give you feedback.

Plus, this is the week to start writing the back matter. First of all, read the back page in THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER. This will help you write a similar section in your manuscript. I’ll post some tips on how to do this in an upcoming post this week.

Have fun!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 20, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in One Month

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How are you doing with ChaBooCha and the Chapter Book Challenge? If you’re following along on my blog and writing an early reader chapter book did you finish your last chapter yesterday?

I’m still not done! Sometimes life gets so busy and you have to attend to other things. That happened to me this week.

The art galleys came in for a set of 10 early readers that will be published soon. I had to drop everything and pore over 120 pages of cute and adorable illustrations. What fun! And then I had to write a dozen pages of little “games” and simple “activities” for the books that we’d been waiting for the galleys to come in because the games and activities were based on the art.

Whew! That’s all done and turned into my editor.

So here I am, back again at the Chapter Book Challenge. I’m picking up right where I left off and am moving full steam ahead.

How about you? If you haven’t finished the challenge, don’t despair! Just pick up right where you left off and move forward full steam ahead.

These challenges are here to motivate you and encourage you, not to defeat you or make you feel like you’ll never succeed.

So wherever you are today, just take the next step. And then the next! And most of all, have fun with what you’re doing.

Happy writing!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 17, 2015

WriteShop: A Writing Curriculum that Rocks!


As some of you may know, I’ve had the amazing privilege of working with the publishers of WriteShop to help write their Primary and Junior curriculum for elementary kids. Can I tell you how much fun it was to take all the techniques and skills I’ve used during my career as a writer and put them into a hands-on incremental curriculum for kids that’s fun, engaging and teaches them to love writing as much as I do?!!!!!

As most of you may NOT know, however, right now they are having a free give-away contest of a COMPLETE WRITESHOP CURRICULUM SET!!!!! This is such an amazing opportunity. I just had to share this exciting news with you. If you are a homeschooling mama (or dad) or know someone else who is a homeschooling parent, and you want to have a chance to win this amazing curriculum, just hop on over to one of these blogs and register to win today. Plus you can read the reviews they posted of the curriculum and how their kids really do love it and are learning to love to write.





Posted by: nancyisanders | March 17, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in One Month

As we’re working on writing chapters 5 and 6 yesterday and today, I wanted to share a couple of tips with you.

#1. Usually around this spot in my manuscript I discover I don’t really like what I’m doing. It helps to remember that this is a first draft. If I can just get the first draft written from the beginning to the end, I can go back in and fix things later. It’s okay to have lousy spots now.

#2. I like to start my writing sessions each day usually by reading over what I wrote the day before or even earlier. I like to go back and fix glaring spots that bug me. For example, originally I had 2 adult characters named Mr. Smith and Mr. Jones. I totally deleted Mr. Smith and combined his lines and character with Mr. Jones. I felt this was simpler for a kid’s book at this reading level. Then I also changed Mr. Jones’ name to “Construction Boss” similar to how “Measuring Man” is named in our mentor text, THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER.

#3. I’m keeping a short character log with notes about each different character such as “Construction Boss” speaks in short sentences and barks out commands because he’s used to giving orders to his crew. Then I go back over what I’ve written and fix Construction Boss’s lines to make sure they are as short as possible and in a command tone as much as possible. This is helping my characters to each have a distinct voice.

Also, in these two chapters (5 and 6) we want to make sure our characters are heading toward the end of the book and they are directly influenced or dealing with the change that happened at the turning point to get them moving toward the conclusion of the main story problem.

Happy writing!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 13, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in One Month

Red Flyer Roller Coaster plot

If you look at the plot chart for THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER, the mentor text I’m using along with some of you for our CHABOOCHA Challenge this month, you’ll see that Chapter 4 is where the turning point happens.

Here are some tidbits of info about a turning point:
*This is the middle of the book.
*This is where something happens that changes the main character in some way that it propels her to the end of the book and the conclusion of the main story problem.
*This is the place some authors claim is like the door of no return. Something happens and the main character will never be the same.

Here in our mentor text, the turning point is where Sophie Bean’s legs start hurting. We don’t know it and she doesn’t know it but this is where the solution to the entire story arc will generate from: she’s starting to grow tall enough so that by the end of the summer she’ll be able to ride the roller coaster!

So if you’ve already written your Chapter 4 or are just getting ready to start, make sure you have the turning point in here.

Then on Monday we’ll write Chapter 5 and start moving our main character toward the ending. Yay!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 13, 2015

Book Review: Words To Dream On

Words to Dream On: Bedtime Bible Stories and Prayers
By Diane Stortz
Art by Diane Le Feyer

This is a sweet and beautifully illustrated 224-page book with over 50 Bible stories from both the Old and New Testament. Each selection starts by listing which Scriptures the story covers so you can read it from a Bible if you’d like. There is also one key verse before the story starts called “Words to Dream On” which gives the theme of the story as a nice take-away for bedtime devotions. After the story is finished, there is a “Bedtime Blessing” which is an encouraging thought to leave with your child before you turn out the light along with a “Sleepy-Time Prayer” to pray together. At the end of the book there is a short section of tips to help create a happy bedtime routine with your child.

What I Like
I especially like the whole feel of this book. What a beautiful, tender, and biblical treasure to share each night together as you tuck your little one into bed! I love all the features that make it perfect for using with a bedtime routine such as the “Bedtime Blessing” and “Sleepy-Time Prayer.” The art is so fresh, original, and delightful, too. I especially like how in night-time scenes (including on the cover) it looks like the stars are hanging on strings from the sky. So adorable!!!! Between the beautiful re-tellings of these Bible stories in words little ones can understand and the soft and endearing illustrations, this is sure to become a favorite for families who are intentional about sending their children off to dreamland with God’s Word tucked into their heart and the love of God wrapped like a blanket around them.

-Thanks, BookLook Bloggers for another wonderful free book in exchange for my honest review!

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Posted by: nancyisanders | March 11, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in One Month

CHABOOCHA calendar 2015

If you’re following along with my calendar this month to write an early reader chapter book using THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER as your mentor text, today we’re working on Chapter 3.

As you’re writing new content for this chapter as well as editing Chapter 2 which you wrote yesterday, there are a couple of tips I’d like to share.

For starters, both of these chapters are all about different ways your main character is trying to solve the main story problem. In our mentor text, Sophie Bean informs Grandma that she is simply too big to ride the merry-go-round any more but she’s still not tall enough to ride the roller coaster.

In Chapter 3, Sophie Bean brings along a pair of Mommy’s high heels to wear to make her tall enough to go.

What is your main character trying to do in your Chapters 2 and 3 to solve her main story problem? Show this happening in your Chapters 2 and 3.

Also, let’s talk a little bit about transitions.

Chapter 2 is one complete scene.

It starts with a TRANSITION: “When they got home…”

This transitions from the previous scene in the last chapter to the next scene in Chapter 2.

You’ll find transitions such as these in between scenes in our mentor text and you can use similar ones in yours. When you’re writing a short chapter book such as this with a limited word count, you don’t want to waste an entire paragraph moving from scene to scene.

On page 12, the transition in between scenes is “The next week…”

On page 17, the transition in between scenes is “The next week…”

On page 18, the transition in between scenes is “At the beach…”

On page 20, the transition in between scenes is “A few weeks later…”

You can go from scene to scene with very short transitions just like these to move quickly through the passage of time to concentrate on scenes, the building blocks of your story!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 9, 2015

Free How-to Writing Book Give-away!


I wanted to let you know you can enter a free book give-away for a copy of my book, YES! YOU CAN LEARN HOW TO WRITE BEGINNING READERS AND CHAPTER BOOKS.

It’s happening at the Chapter Book Challenge site, CHABOOCHA!

So hop on over and post a comment to enter to win. This book is a must-have on your writer’s bookshelf if you want to write early readers, beginning readers, chapter books, or even if you want to write your book at a certain reading level so kids in a certain grade can read it.

And if you already have a copy, it’s also a great gift for your writing buddy or fellow critiquer!

Yes, I’m the author of this book. If you look in the photo above, it’s the red book in the middle of the stack of books. Those other books are some…just some!… of the early readers and chapter books I’ve written over the years. I drew from the experiences I’ve had writing those books to get the material for this how-to book.

And to see both my how-to books for children’s writers, here’s another picture! My other book (the pink and black one) YES! YOU CAN LEARN HOW TO WRITE CHILDREN’S BOOKS, GET THEM PUBLISHED, AND BUILD A SUCCESSFUL WRITING CAREER is all about strategies I’ve used to build a successful writing career so you can, too!


Posted by: nancyisanders | March 9, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in 1 Month


I thought you’d like to see a picture of me typing out my mentor text last week. That’s because today we’re going to really use some of the stats from our mentor text, THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER to help us write our first chapter and start off with a BANG!

And just in case you were wondering, I have my book propped up next to my computer in a bookholder called a BookChair. You can see a couple of close-up shots down below of the two sizes I have.

I must say I love love love this BookChair! Unfortunately it’s not produced anymore but you can still buy a couple of them new or used for under $20 at a reseller such as on Amazon. I keep mine next to my computer and it’s the handiest thing for propping up a book when you are:

* typing out your mentor text
* typing up your bibliography
* typing research notes into your document

Just thought I’d share how much I love this in case you were looking for something like this to make your writing life easier.



Okay, now for our focus on writing today. If you’re following along with me on my calendar to write an early chapter book, today’s the day we write Chapter 1.

Let’s look at the stats in our mentor text first, though.

When I ran a spelling and grammar check on Chapter 1 in the text I typed out for THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER, here’s what I discovered:

It had 370 words. (We can DO this today, friends!)
It had 18 paragraphs. (Yep, I know we can do this today.)
It had 29 sentences. (YES! We can write less than 30 sentences today for our goal.)

On the average, it has 1.7 sentences per paragraph. (We’re talking short paragraphs here)
It had 12.7 words per sentence. (Not too short and not too long)
It had 4.4 characters per word. (Most words were on the short side so kids could read them easily.)

It had 0% passive sentences (no weak verbs here!)
The Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level was 5.3 for readability. (That seemed a little high for second graders so I’m actually trying to keep below that for my own text.)

I felt encouraged already.

Then I ran a spelling and grammar check on the FIRST SCENE in Chapter 1. That’s because the first scene of a book is very, very important to hook the reader (and the editor!).

To help clarify exactly what the FIRST SCENE is, I’ll share it with you here, along with the readability statistics and a few other notes:

Scene 1
3 pages in published book or 1 and 1/2 spreads

Readability Statistics
145 words
12 paragraphs
13 sentences
1.4 sentences per paragraph
10.9 words pre sentence
0 passive sentences
5.2 Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level

“TOO SMALL!” announced Measuring Man.
“Are you sure I’m not tall enough?” pleaded Sophie Bean.
“Sorry, you must be 44 inches tall to ride the Red Flyer Roller Coaster. You are only 43 inches,” answered Measuring Man, as he guarded the entrance to the roller coaster with his tall measuring stick.
“NEXT!” he called to Sophie Bean’s twin cousins, Ryan and Parker.
“Sophie Bean, Sophie Bean, the littlest bean we’ve ever seen!” sang Ryan and Parker.
“Another summer and you’re still not tall enough!” said Ryan.
“Forty-six inches!” announced Measuring Man to Parker. “Forty-seven inches! Enjoy the ride,” he said to Ryan.
Sophie Bean turned and slowly walked back down the stairs of the roller coaster toward Mommy and Aunt Lynn.
“I’m so tired of sitting and watching them. I wanted to go on the Red Flyer this year,” said Sophie Bean.

There are several things to note about this opening scene.

#1. It starts right in the middle of the action. Start your first scene right in the middle of the action.
#2. It’s nearly all dialogue. Make your opening scene have lots of dialogue.
#3. There’s hardly any description other than “tall” measuring stick and “twin” cousins. This means at this reading level you really don’t need to tell the reader Sophie Bean had freckles or was wearing a pink shirt and blue jeans skirt. The kids can see this in the illustration. So don’t put lots of description into your first scene.
#4 Each character has a name, even Measuring Man. Give your characters names, especially fun ones.
#5. We already know the main story problem in the opening lines: Sophie Bean is too small to ride the roller coaster. Let your reader know your main story problem in the first opening lines of your scene.

Do you feel ready to write your first scene? At this level, it won’t be very long. Then finish the rest of your first chapter so that it’s close to the same word count as this one.

One last note: The last sentence of Chapter 1 in our mentor text is CHANGE 1 on our plot chart.
“She just had to get on that roller coaster.”

By the last sentence of your first chapter, plug in CHANGE 1 as well. Bring the reader into Act II by having him pass the bridge of no return.

If you’re just not sure about all this early chapter book stuff, it might help to read my book, YES! YOU CAN LEARN HOW TO WRITE BEGINNING READERS AND CHAPTER BOOKS. Chapter 12 will be especially helpful this month for the CHABOOCHA challenge.

I’ve written a number of chapter books for various publishers at various reading levels both fiction and nonfiction and share lots of strategies and tips in my book to help you experience success in this fun genre. If you don’t have the time or resources to buy it now you can always read lots of the text for free on the LOOK INSIDE THE BOOK feature on Amazon. Maybe it will help you this week as you’re working on your first half of this 8-chapter chapter book!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 6, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in 1 Month

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I want to encourage you to enjoy the journey you’re taking this month to join the ChaBooCha challenge to write a chapter book in 1 month.

One of the ways to enjoy your adventure better is to learn to listen to your inner voice.

For example, if you’re working hard today on plotting your own story plot but your cast of characters keeps talking in your head, go ahead and put your plot aside for a little bit and let your characters speak.

Have fun typing down the conversations they’re having with each other or the scenes that are unfolding in your brain.

Then when they’re finished for awhile, you can come back to the task for the day.

This happened to me. I was in the middle of typing out my mentor text THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER when I couldn’t get the opening scene out of my mind. So I stopped, wrote down the scene that was begging to be told, and then when that was finished, I went back to my file and continued typing out my mentor text word for word.

Another way to enjoy the journey more is to learn not to be too much of a perfectionist. Writing is, after all, more like planting a garden than it is like baking a cake.

If you get an ingredient wrong in the cake it will turn out strange or even a total flop.

But if you plant seeds in the wrong spot in your garden and discover they need more sunlight or more shade, you can simply dig them up and replant them in the right spot.

So go ahead and sit down at your computer or put pen to paper and focus on each day’s task without stressing that it’s perfect. A manuscript will never be perfect even when it’s published. You’ll always find things you’d like to fix.

Just work on your task for today and make it the best you know how to do it at this time and then move forward to tomorrow. You can always come back and revise and edit and polish what you worked on at a later time.

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 4, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in 1 Month–Plot

Red Flyer Roller Coaster plot

If you’re following along with the CHABOOCHA challenge this month and also writing an early chapter book using THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER as your mentor text, scheduled on the calendar for today is “Chart plot of mentor text”
and brainstorm plot ideas.

As a working writer under contracts to write various books from magazine stories to picture books to chapter books, I always start first by using my Basic Plot Worksheet A.

And when I’m following a mentor text, I like to first chart the plot of my mentor text before I tackle my own work in progress.

You can see the information I filled in along the left column of the chart above.

Then, for the plot elements I first had to ask myself what the main story plot is for THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER? That led me to the main story problem which is that Sophie Bean is too short to ride the roller coaster.

After I identified that, it took a little digging around to discover the 3 key changes that take place in the story:

Change 1: Takes us from the beginning of the story where we see the main story problem and starts the middle of the story where now we see Sophie Bean is determined to do something to solve this problem.

Change 2: This is the turning point of the whole story where suddenly Sophie Bean has a new problem to deal with…her legs hurt.

Change 3: Suddenly Sophie Bean finds out it’s the last day to go to the amusement park this summer and thus the last chance she’ll get to ride the roller coaster!

And then we learn the conclusion to the story: Her legs hurt because they were growing pains and she grew tall enough to go on the roller coaster. Yay!

One of the nice things about writing a book for this reading level is that the plot is pretty straightforward. There is a clear beginning, middle, and end. The problem is presented in the first couple of paragraphs of the story and it all wraps up nicely at the end…even with a fun surprise by having grandma ride with her for her very first ride on the roller coaster.

As you’re preparing to plot your own story tomorrow, keep all these basic elements in mind. For a book at this readability level you don’t even need a subplot. Just keep it nice and simple. It’s a great way to get our feet wet writing these chapter books, don’t you think?

So as you’re brainstorming plot ideas today, just think of these basic story elements:

A) What is your main story problem that the main character struggles with? This is how your story should start.
B) What is the first change that happens where your main character sets off on her journey to solve the big problem?
C) What is the turning point, the second change that happens to lead your character toward the ending of the story and the solution to her problem?
D) What is the third change that happens to your character to lead her to the end of the story.
E) How will the story end and how will your main character solve the main story problem?

Having these elements in your head will help you as you start to write your story next week. It will be your road map to success. Brainstorming ideas today will give you material to help you plot your own story on the BASIC PLOT WORKSHEET A tomorrow.

To download your own copy of my Basic Plot Worksheet A, please visit the site of my writing buddies, Writing According to Humphrey and Friends. Scroll down to the CHARTS AND WORKSHEETS TO GET ORGANIZED FOR SUCCESS and click on the link to download and print your own copy of the BASIC PLOT WORKSHEET A. You can use it tomorrow to plot the structure of your own chapter book so you’ll be all ready to start writing next Monday!

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 2, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in 1 Month

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ChaBooCha is officially happening and I hope you’re having fun so far!

I just wanted to update you on what I’ve been doing so far so you can try out some of the strategies I’m doing to see if they work for you, too.

I’m following my calendar, so after reading my mentor text, I brainstormed ideas for my main character.

Here’s how that brainstorming session went:
1) First I made a list of some early chapter book or easy reader main characters that have been popular with kids in kindergarten through second grade. I just made a short list, but here’s what I came up with:

Cam Jensen
Nate the Great
Junie B. Jones
The Magic Tree House
Ramona the Pest
The Imagination Station series with Patrick and Beth

2) I tried to think of qualities that kids like about these characters and why they appeal to young readers.

The main reason I stopped making this list was because an idea popped into my head at this point for a character of my own.

3) So I just spent an hour or so letting my brain “play” with the idea. It actually was in a helpful mood this afternoon and gave me lots of ideas including conversations my character might have, background stories of my character, and also information about my main character’s family members. During this time my brain was popping with plot ideas and setting ideas, too, so even though I won’t officially spend time on those topics until another day this week (see the calendar) I went ahead and jotted down all the ideas that came to me so I could explore them more later.

After spending this chunk of time with my potential character, I decided to choose him as the one I’ll write about this month.

I want to encourage you not to stress too much about this decision for your character. Just pick one that seems good for now. If at the end of the month it’s not your favorite decision, you can try out a different character in a brand new story.

Whether or not you were able to generate a lot of ideas about your main character, to help you brainstorm more about your main character plus tomorrow when you brainstorm your cast of characters, visit the site of my feline writing buddies, Writing According to Humphrey and Friends.

You’ll find some helpful activities you can do to create a strong character that has potential for a series. This is the kind of character Kaeden Books is looking for in their early chapter books, so that’s my goal for the CHABOOCHA challenge this month.

Posted by: nancyisanders | March 2, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in 1 Month

Today is all about typing your mentor text, brainstorming your cast of characters, and brainstorming your setting.

If your mentor text is really really long, you don’t have to type the whole thing. Even typing out a chapter or two will help.

But if you’re using THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER as your mentor text, go ahead and type out the whole thing. It’s only 2600 words.

Many folks ask me why I type out my mentor texts and encourage others to do the same. It’s for a variety of reasons.

Reason #1 is that it helps train your brain to think in this genre and reading level.

Reason #2 is it makes it handy to highlight various portions of text and run a work count or readability level or other test on it.

Reason #3 is it gives me practice typing out a book the same length mine is going to be. This way I can see how many manuscript pages it takes for each chapter and for the entire book.

I’ve finished typing out 2 chapters so far of THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER. Here at the bottom is a picture of how I’m doing it. I’m dividing it up per page number so I can keep an eye on that as well.

Now as you’re brainstorming your characters and setting, I want to remind you of something. If you’re writing a story to submit to Kaeden Books as I am, know that Kaeden Books purchases all rights to your manuscript. So be sure to choose a cast of characters that you can give away.

If you have ideas for characters based on your own family or on ideas that are near and dear to your heart, you might want to save those for a manuscript to submit to a publisher that will allow you to register the copyright in your own name. Kaeden registers the copyright in their name which means they own the rights to the story. (You can find out this info by seeing who the copyright is listed under on the copyright page of every book.)

When I write for publishers who purchase all rights to my stories, I like to use ideas that aren’t near and dear to my heart. The QUALITY of the stories are still tops, it’s just that I’m not as attached to the TOPICS.

And with that in mind, I wanted to let you know that after this month is over, I’ve decided to write a second chapter book using THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER (or a similar-length chapter book) as my mentor text. I’ll be posting about the journey here on my blog. Only next time we won’t be rushing along to finish it in just one month. We’ll go more slowly and really try to dissect this whole process and learn the skills it takes to write these types of books. And I might not submit the next manuscript to Kaeden Books but to my agent instead to try to get it published with a publisher where I can keep my own rights. We’ll see.

But for now, if you’re brainstorming ideas for characters and plot and setting this week and plan to submit your manuscript to Kaeden Books, just be sure you use ideas that are okay in your writer’s heart to give the rights away.


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Posted by: nancyisanders | March 2, 2015

Challenge: Write a Chapter Book in 1 Month

CHABOOCHA calendar 2015

I hope you’re as excited as I am to join the challenge to write a chapter book in just 1 month!

This month I’m joining CHABOOCHA and am planning on writing a chapter book from beginning to end. And after I’m done, I’m planning on submitting it to Kaeden Books, who says in their submissions guidelines that they are particularly interested in receiving beginning chapter books!

So I’m going to be totally honest here.

I’m at square one just like you are.

I am starting this challenge today, just like you are.

I don’t have my characters picked out.

I haven’t the slightest idea what my plot will be.

I don’t even know my setting.

But the one thing I DO have is my mentor text. It’s The Red Flyer Roller Coaster which is published by Kaeden Books.

So this month here on my blog, I’ll be sharing step-by-step what I’m actually doing to write this chapter book from beginning to end.

If you want to write one using the same mentor text so you can follow along more closely with me, then go ahead and order it in. If you have your own mentor text or if you want to write a middle grade novel instead of a early chapter book, you might benefit more from following along with my Middle Grade Novel teleclass workshop.

And if you sorta kinda wanna try writing this challenge but you’re just nor sure how practical it is to write a whole book in one month, I’ll let you in on a couple of insider information on the real world of a children’s writer.

This last week I heard out of the blue from an editor who offered me a contract for a 6-week project to write a 8000-9000-word manuscript for teens. (That’s 3 times as many words as THE RED FLYER ROLLER COASTER and what I’ll be writing this month for my chapter book.)

And I also had a phone call from another editor last week who said that IF they decide to move forward on a chapter book for which they MIGHT offer a contract to me, it might need to be a really fast turnaround. Like maybe three weeks for 10,000 words.

So it’s challenges like the one we’re doing here on my blog this month that help me strengthen my writing muscles and keep in shape to feel capable to sign these contracts and then write and deliver those manuscripts. (And then get the nice paychecks in the mail!)

I hope you decide to join in the adventure!

As I explained, I’ll basically be sharing here on my blog the actual steps I’m taking to write my own chapter book this month.

And the first thing I did was make a calendar to follow. I don’t know about you, but calendars help me pace myself and get a project done on time. I don’t always stick with a calendar, but I make adjustments if I need to as I move along.

As you can see if you look at today’s assignment on the calendar, today’s a good day to read your mentor text and brainstorm ideas for your main character. Kaeden Books says in their submission guidelines that they are particularly looking for “manuscripts with strong characters with potential to become a series.” Plus they expand that to say they’re looking for “interesting characters that will appeal to children in pre-kindergarten through second grade.”

Let me know if you need help on how to brainstorm characters that fit this description.

Also, you can print out the calendar that I’m going to follow. But if your writing schedule is different or you’d like to use a blank calendar, I also included a blank calendar with the monkey in the middle OR a totally blank calendar with no graphics at all for you to use. You can download and print them out here:

CHABOOCHA calendars

Posted by: nancyisanders | February 27, 2015

Write a NF Picture Book in 1 Week: Final Day

For those of you who have been joining in on our adventure, I hope you’ve been enjoying the process of writing a nonfiction picture book in just one week.

And for those of you who are already overpacked with other projects (whether writing projects or just stuff) I hope you earmark these notes to use when you have time to work on your nonfiction manuscripts.

Thank you for following along! It’s hard to believe we started this journey last October to write and submit a nonfiction book to Kaeden Books.

First we just went through the process, step-by-step where I showed you what I do…actually do…to write an early reader nonfiction picture book manuscript to submit to a publisher.

Then this past month, once we had all the basics down, we sped up the process to write a second manuscript in three weeks from beginning to end.

And for this last leg of journey, we sped up the process once again to write a third manuscript in just 1 week from beginning to end.

I’m wrapping up my manuscript today and hope to pop it in the mail tonight.

I don’t know about you, but for me this produced a great feeling of satisfaction on various levels:

1) I could feel my writing muscles stretch and get strengthened each step of the way.
2) The task actually became easier each time I wrote a brand new manuscript to submit.
3) Now I have 3 new nonfiction early reader picture book manuscripts.

For those of you who wrote one, two, or all three manuscripts, what are some of the highlights for you? And for those of you who followed along but are waiting to write your manuscripts at a future date, what did you learn over these past months together?

If you remember back in October of last year at the start of this journey, we were going to learn how to write chapter books to submit to Kaeden Books, too. But then I opted to dig into nonfiction first.

But now we’re back where we started from and are all ready to launch into chapter books.

And as I mentioned before, the timing is perfect because we’re going to follow along with CHABOOCHA all during the month of March right here on my blog…the Chapter Book Challenge… to write a complete chapter book from beginning to end all in just one month!

I’m hoping you’ll join in the fun…it all starts right here on Monday, March 2!

Posted by: nancyisanders | February 26, 2015

Following a Mentor Text

Thanks, Claire, for asking questions about how to know which page count to choose for your manuscript.

Let’s compare two nonfiction books that Kaeden publishes:

How to Make Snack Mix
How to Make a Card

First let’s look at the stats:

How to Make Snack Mix is for Kindergarten. It has 47 words and 16 pages. It is for Guided Reading Level C.

How to Make a Card is for 1st Grade. It has 69 words and 20 pages. It is for Guided Reading Level G.

Now let’s look at the sentence structure of both books:

How to Make Snack Mix starts with 2 sentences of instruction.
After that, most of the sentences are repeated following this pattern:
Put in one cup of peanuts.
Add one cup of marshmallows.
Add one cup of candy-coated chocolates.
Add one cup of raisins.

How to Make a Card, however,does not use repetition of sentences. Each sentence is new and structured differently.

So if you want to write a 16 page book, then I would recommend repeating most of the same sentence structure throughout. Plus use a shorter word count of about 50 words.

But if you want to write a 20-page book, then you can be more free to write a different type of sentence for each page. And you should use a longer word count of about 70 words.

Does this help clarify what you want your manuscript to be?

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